paraphrasing on lines (19, 35, 72, 132, 169, 200). When paraphrasing I tried to gather the facts and thoughts of my client’s story but that did not turn out so well because I constantly over thinking on what I could and could not say. Line 19 \ could have been improved by saying “Your yoga practice and effort to make time to go to gym has been made you feel better”. On line 41 I could have said “You have found a way to be more financially stable by taking the initiative to find yourself another restaurant…
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