A Love Left Unsaid Analysis

Words: 558
Pages: 3

There were many major errors found within the essay, A Love Left Unsaid. The foremost concern was not supporting the main thesis point. I have found my downfall is sentencing structure and on the top of that list are run-ons along with sentence fragments. I know which words I wish to use, but find it hard to execute the correct spelling and therefore the true meaning is lost. There were missuses of wording, where I installed a correctly spelled but inadvertent word resulting in a partial change of context or confusion for the reader.
I am laboring to proofread more effectively in order to identify and amend grammatical and word selection errors. I feel if I work backwards by having my last line, for the rough draft in mind, it would work better in supporting thesis point; this line might or might not change as I build my argument. Working within the focus for the thesis statement and a strong supporting statement in each paragraph will help to eliminate an unsupported essay. To help with my sentence structure I will read the essay starting from the end. This style will remove the easy flow of words therefore I will truly see what is on the paper and not what is in my head.
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Like most current day students I am pressed for time with a career to pursue which magnifies the situation. This distress grows the longer I try to think about how I am going to complete this assignment successfully and within the allotted schedule. I tie myself up in knots and become my own worst enemy. My thought process operates on many levels simultaneously and I there is so much in my head, I find it getting mixed up when traveling from the brain down to my hand. This has always been the case and is a learning, creative process and testing anomaly I must compensate for through more rigorous control