The first project, Rhetorical Analysis I wrote was to respond the connections and relations between noir and “the audiences of the time tends to associate themselves with the outlaws more than a decent citizen owing to the large romanticizing of criminality” which is my thesis in the first draft of the RA. For this thesis, my focusing point should have been on “romanticizing of criminality”, but in my first and second draft of this essay, I messed up with the thesis with no explanations and reasons in all my paragraphs. Below is the thesis with no related
