My hook sentence is guess who is looking for Bud. I thought a good topic sentence would be if Herman was looking for Bud. Herman might be related to Bud and his mother maybe not. Bud does not know that he has a long, lost grandfather.
Bud was a ten- year old boy who was an orphan. His mom died when he was six when she died. He was searching for his dad but found his grandfather instead. He traveled from Flint to Grand Rapids. Bud never gave up to find his family. He had help from his friend Buggs. He also met Herman E. Calloway's band. If Herman was looking for Bud and his mom. He could have his band help
