Hi, my name is Thomas Phelps, I am interested in Being The Change because I enjoy helping people become successful and also being helped along the way. I am mostly a thinker and a do-er at some things. I’m very willing to work for almost anybody, all you have to do is ask me to help you out with something and I will try and do my upmost to help you out. Like I stated before I enjoy helping people succeed with anything they need help with if I am capable of doing so. I for sure like the support Sarah Coleman has been giving me throughout the month or two that I have been playing polo for her husband Dan Coleman. I would love to continue playing polo mainly because it’s something that I enjoy doing and I treasure every second I have to play because I do realize most children or teens don’t get this opportunity or many of the opportunities my family and close family members have given me. I believe Being The Change can help me with the goals that I have reset for myself, just with support from all surrounding Being The Change members because I have not met one Individual involved that is not willing to help others on their journey to success. In my opinion this is going to be the best group or organization that I have gotten involved with so far in my life. Back to polo, I enjoy Dan Coleman’s coaching, he knows how to word things to teens better than some of my old coaches, he helped me out at first by giving me free lessons at least once a week and all I have to do is clean…
Paine has been able to open the eyes of American citizens to new ideas and arguments. In his essay Common Sense, he provides a number of arguments about Great Britain and the American government. He wrote an essay that included the thoughts that many of the citizens of America were thinking about, but didn’t act upon. He also provided several examples to explain his point of view. Furthermore, through the essay Common Sense, readers are able to see why Great Britain was not much of a help to America…
Everyone talks about climate change and how the Earth is slowly deteriorating, but no one seems to have specific examples. In Linnea Saukko’s “How to Poison the Earth,” she does use specific examples of what is causing climate change. She uses satire with a hint of sarcasm in her essay. She gives the reader specific examples of how to poison the Earth, but not really wanting to poison the Earth. Gretel Ehrlich writes her essay, “Chronicles of Ice,” a little differently. She uses…
paper plays a big role in how the reader perceives it. The author of the article How Inactivity Changes the Brain, Gretchen Reynolds says why not having an active life is bad for human beings. By not being active it can change the shape of the brain and also cause other diseases. Gretchen Reynolds proves these points by writing an article using rhetorical choices such as language, structure of the essay and transition words and phrases.
One of the moves that this author uses in this article is the…
DARWINISM, SOCIAL DARWINISM, IMPERIALISM & RACISM
Main Question: How did Darwinism, Social Darwinism and Imperialism
become related ideologies by the end of the 19th
Instructions: You will write a 750 – 1000 words essay paragraph essay on the question
Your task is to show the connection between the ideologies. This is a
rather important essay in that it sets up the entire 20th century --- a
century of massive social…
of his essay is that humans tend to not notice the devastating effect misguided light has on everything from insects and migrating birds to even ourselves, as human beings due to our need to light up the night.
As the years go by, more areas are being urbanized all around the world. Hundreds of years ago, light pollution wasn’t an issue due to humans using torches, lanterns, etc. Currently, there are artificially lit highways constructed every day, along with skyscrapers and factories being built…
between the two objects, people, subjects, or concepts? List as many similarities that you can think of.
Adoption= pursue earlier goals, independently living, no early parenthood, not being forced into a relationship or even marriage.
Abortion= pursue earlier goals, independently living, no early parenthood, not being forced into a relationship or even marriage.
What are the differences between the two objects, people, subjects, or concepts? List as many differences that you can think of.
5 March 2015
In his essay
it is clear to see how Henry Thoreau expresses his
disapproval for the United States government. His multiple rhetorical appeals such as logos,
pathos and ethos invoke the reader to side by focusing his ideas around our democratic
government. The three main ideas that Thoreau relates to are the idea as government as an
Essay Structure Outline
“The Big 10”
Hook – quickly grab your reader’s attention
Background – give background information and transition into your claim
Thesis Statement – a 1-2 sentence summary of your main claim
BODY PARAGRAPHS →
You will need multiple Body Paragraphs!
Topic Sentence – a sub-claim that previews the paragraph
Context – provide context and information about your evidence
Evidence – include relevant evidence that proves your claim…
September 17, 2012
Summary Response essay
Facing Poverty with a Rich Girls Habits
I always thought about what would wealthy people feel if they were in poor people’s shoes. To see how middle class people struggle with money instead of assuming everything is easy. I wondered if wealthy people would do if they went bankrupt and how that person would get back on their feet. What intrigued me to write my essay is a memoir that I read called “Facing Poverty with a Rich Girls…
peers feedback on my expository essay is really a stress relieve and
very helpful. I receive a lot of different information from the instructor that will be very
helpful to my expository essay. I got feedback about not using third party person and
my introduction to be more specific on what my topic is mainly about. Having two peer
review could use all the help I can get. I can now use all the feedback given by my peers
and re-write the parts of my essay that had vagueness. I can also…