Charting An Essay: On Not Going To School

Submitted By Erica-Gibson
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Pages: 2

Charting an Essay: On Not Going to School

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Doing
Operating
Reacting
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Mandatory attendance law forces kids with no ambition for education to attend school regardless to what they may want.
The author has stated that if they remove the attendance law that it would make more room for the students who want to learn.
The writer identifies the law as a no choice attendance based on the mandatory attendance law for our American education system
I don’t agree so much with the writer. I feel kids should still go to school. All children need an education
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Remove all together the American education attendance law and only allow those who are actually committed in getting an education to attend.
He is trying to persuade his audience that the education law should be for students who yearning an education
Presents several arguments regarding the education law

Author does provide strong facts on his point of view on the educational attendance law
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Ask a high school teacher if a disobliging student learns anything of value or if they do there homework
He is assuring the audience his point.
Writer refers to past threats of low grade scores which did not motivate students to do better.

I don’t really agree with the claim that he presents
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Dissolve the attendance law to separate those from taking school seriously to those who use school as an excuse for entertaining.

The author is sharing his point of view on what he believes to be true for kids who want an education