College Admissions Essay: Improving My Life

Words: 575
Pages: 3

Prompt #1:

Our ideals shape our ambitions meanwhile our families impact the values we so firmly stand for. I'm determine to improve the world by inspiring the future youth to dedicate their lives to science and medicine in order to save the human race, such as my father has inspired me. Through a medical career, I hope to change my life by improving the life of others. Because my family has raise me to become a unique individual who promotes the goodness left in humanity, I strive to become the symbolization of strength and perseverance.

My father was a promising future engineer, he migrated to American in order to seek a brighter future for our family but was inhibited by my coming into existence. In order to provide for me, he quit school and left his dreams shattered so that he could piece together a future for me. Watching my father struggle and slave day and night has motivated me to become successful so that his sacrifices shall not be in vain. I aspire to take his broken dreams and piece them back together, with the same hands I hope to save people's lives with someday, I will first save my father's by retrieving the dreams he once dreamt. My father fuels my ambition of becoming a respectable and selfless person, someday I dream of impacting lives as greatly as my father has mine.
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Although my family is not wealthy, my father has never left me feeling less fortunate than anyone else. Over the years, I have profited from helping others improve their lives. I learned that the fulfillment in helping other cannot be bought, but it must be earned. I learned to appreciate the true worth of a dollar. I never felt envious of others who were born in a prosperous family and with a silver spoon in their mouth, because my father provided me with much more than what money could buy, knowledge and righteous moral