“The most difficult journey is back to the place where you failed”. When we fail or make a mistake we learn and develop as a person. Gradually redeeming myself as well as finding myself I have learned so much through my experience, gaining a sense of power I seized to obtain. Over the years, my journey started to become clearer. Fashion became my life, my obsession, this is my passion. My parents had taken my brother and I out to dinner several months before the big move. They broke the news to us at the dinner table and I was so happy yet not acknowledging the fact I would get older and learn to understand more about how much of a significant influence this move would have on my life. I was just living in the moment excited yet overwhelmed by the fact I was moving to New York. I was 8 years old, still a child, still many years to grow up and understand the importance of such an experience. It is as if my life has been split in two. I am 17 years old now and 8 years ago I was just moving to America. The first 8 years of my life were spent in England. I was born and raised in a completely different lifestyle compared to America. School was different, cars were different, the streets were different, food was different, everything was so different. When I found out that I had to move I was so excited. My family and I stayed with a couple they had once met on their Honey moon who just so happened to live in Copiague so if you’re wondering why we settled in Copiague out of all other places a typical person would preferably choose, I guess it was fate. Coming to America changed my life in so many ways. I started 3rd grade being oblivious yet open to everything. The school work was even different. I found myself fitting in with so many different people; I suppose the reason for that was simply because my accent was so amusing. I accepted everybody equally and they accepted me in return and eventually this made me confident with myself, because I was never too sure how I was going to fit in at school. I figured it was easier because I was only 8 when I moved here and I was still growing up and adapting to things, not quite analyzing-just absorbing the experience of my new adventure. Living in New York life experiences since I was 8 years old have been more positive. For example the climate, the guidance encouragement from school, i’ve managed to travel, opening my eyes to new styles and cultures. Being that my family was separated, it brought my parents, my brother, and I closer together because we are all each other has.…
The Influence of Culture
UW English 131
UW English 131
So many things in today’s society can influence the person you are and will become. Things we watch on T.V. influence today’s younger generations greatly. We see the way people act on T.V. and we try to impersonate that character whether ‘tis bad or good. I’m originally from Germany and because of that and my mother and grandmother being German we celebrate holidays the…
If you were to look back on your high school years, what advice would you give to someone beginning their high school career? What would you tell the children that are about to experience there life, how it is in high school. This essay will explain how high school is now, and how it was when I entered high school. This advice I am giving the students will let them understand that high school is serious, not a joke.
When, I first started high school…
Dear Whomever it concerns,
As a kid I was always into school, and I liked learning new things. My parents always told me if I wanted to be something in life I would have to get an education, and to work hard in life for what I wanted. I took that in consideration, and that became my motivation to strive for my success. Since then I stayed focus in school and did my best to get good grades. I use to be easily distracted by things that made me procrastinate and sidetrack me from…
Education has always been important to me, especially since no one in my family has ever graduated from college. I have faced several obstacles growing up and even though many people, even some of my own family members, thought I couldn't surpass them. My hardships have given me the drive to remain focused on my ultimate goal: achieving higher education.
My mother's struggle and her experience have been an inspiration for me. My mother had a difficult childhood and only received…
The question that I was given was why do I want to attend Virginia common wealth university? That question is the reason why I am dedicated to attend VCU. I love the fact that common wealth university has a lot of the basic courses I need in order to become a physical therapist. Not only does VCU have the basic four year courses there is also a medical school department, which I would love to enroll in after my first 4 years. VCU is a great school for me because…
Question: What is one important question you wish we had asked?
College admission essays all have a common theme of, “tell me what I want to hear.” Why do you want to attend our college? What are your plans for the future? Tell us a little about yourself, and so the list goes on. In reality, to know about a student you have to give them a prompt that lights a fire within their imagination. Let them dig into their mind and put everything on that paper, have their deepest thoughts typed…
30 x 2.5 = 75 for your test grade.
Applying to the college of your choice is a little like trying out for the Olympics—many are called, but few are chosen.
Admissions people look forward to this part of the application requirements. After all, this is the time that they finally have a chance to hear your voice. And, this is the time you have to make certain that this voice of yours is heard clearly and emphatically. The college essay is the part of the application that you can control…
January 20, 2015
College is worth it
Do you ever stress about going to college? Worry About the cost? Scared if you’re going into the wrong field of study? College is very important to go to now a days because a lot more jobs are requiring a college education. College is worth the time and money to go through. I believe everyone should go to college and get a degree. In this essay I will be explaining why it’s important to go to college and why it’s worth having…
10 September 2012
College Essay-Prompt 3
All I remember is hearing my mother cry out, “Why? Why? How could this be happening to me?” As I watched the tears stream down her pale white face, I could only wonder what was happening. The vaguely white room of doctor’s office was where we were sitting when all of this panic was going on. It wasn’t my doctor’s appointment though; I found out a few days later that this was the moment my mom was diagnosed with skin…
Many people would probably describe a place where they are perfectly content as an open field or their bed or maybe even the park, but not me, the place where I am most satisfied in my life is the baseball field. I know many people believe that would be crazy because of the yelling, noises and action, but honestly, those aspects are what makes this place so amazing for me. The smell of freshly cut grass, the sound of the glove popping when the ball…