Creative Writing: King Pluto's Castle

Words: 557
Pages: 3

King Pluto and I had arrived at his castle. I could feel my heart drop to the pit of my stomach.
King Pluto says, “ It’s not so bad, it will take some getting use to.”
Caustically I say, “ I don’t want to get use to it, I just want to go home to my mother.”
“Come on my darling let me show you to your room,” King Pluto says.
I replied sarcastically, “ yeah that’s what I want to do.”
King Pluto says, “ what was that my dear.”
“ Nothing,” I replied.
My room was amazing, infact his whole castle was amazing, but I didn’t let him see my astonishment. My room was huge with tall ceilings, the walls were a shimmery gold flakes, and there was the most beautiful flowers, in a vase on the little table.
“Well here you are, I’ll let you settle in,” King Pluto says.
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“No thank you,” I responded, “ I am not hungry.”
“But you must eat my dear,” says Pluto.
“ Says who?” I respond.
King Pluto becomes discouraged, and he and the short hairy guy, fade of down the long, and gloomy hallway, leaving the goodies behind. I didn’t touch the treats at all. Days have past, and still I will not eat, nor drink anything. King Pluto tries everyday to cheer me up, but nothing will cheer me up except for my mother. I missed my mother far too much to be joyful. The days continued on, and I started to grow weaker, and weaker with each passing day. Then one morning I woke, but was unable to stand for I was much too shaky and much to dizzy.
King Pluto was concerned, He came to me and said, “ My darling are you alright.
“No,” I replied, “ My legs cannot hold me up anymore.”
“You poor stubborn girl you're going to kill yourself,” pluto replied.
“I would much rather die, than have to live without my mother,” I said.
King Pluto says, “ In that case we must get you home at once.”
Eagerly I looked him in the eyes and said, “ Really, you will take me