Emily Rapp's Essay I Prayed My Mom Would Leave?

Words: 358
Pages: 2

After reading the first article "Okahandja Lessons", by Emily Rapp, without a doubt, it is a descriptive and narrative essay where the author has the ability to describe how was her journey to Namibia where always happens something very fast. Also, Emily Rapp reflects on her personal experience explaining what she learned about this journey. She created in my mind emotive and terrible images with concise language and clear details. This essay is very well written but the author creates confusion when she talks about an event and then jumps to another completely different.

The second article "I Prayed My Mom Would Leave", by Melissa Chadburn is an emotional piece. This essay is beautiful and made me feel deep emotions, this touched me because