Impromptu Speech Essay

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Mark Quayle
Communications
2/23/2012
Impromptu Speech Self Evaluation
1. I started off my speech by simply asking a rhetorical question to grab the audience’s attention, however I stuttered when delivering it and I feel like I could have came across more confident with my delivery. I also attempted to talk positive about a big city in South Carolina to grab the attention too.
2. One good example I used to deliver my main points would have to be Myrtle Beach. My subject was South Carolina and I felt that if I use a big vacation spot such as Myrtle Beach more people would either be really interested in it or more people would be able to relate to it because they may have been there before or another beach that was very similar. One example I attempted to use that did not work would have to be when I tried to explain the eating and beaches. The eating seemed to have been more of a turn off because a lot of the food down there is seafood and it seemed as if I was pushing that with the restaurants I named.
3. At the end of my speech I repeated everything that I had just spoken about, and I emphasized my interests in each thing giving examples of what I said such as Myrtle Beach is almost always in the 90’s and sunny. It seemed to have been a turn on for most people.
4. My volume needs to be raised; I spoke in more of a mono tone and did not put any emphasis into any of my words. This may have made it more hard to pay attention to me throughout my speech, causing the audience to not really understand or relate to what I was