Mr. Hook's Room: A Narrative Fiction

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Staring outside while I wait for my conference with Mr. Hook, I realized I was scared and my palms were sweaty and a little shaky. When I walked in the smell of the room was like walking in a crowded haunted gym everyone was sweating and looked like zombies. When I open the door it creaked, the floors cracked the light flickered. In the back of the room there is a cabinet that no one can go in. Everyone thought it had kids in it that went missing. The ceiling had spiders webs on it and there was snake skin on the front wall.
“There you are Miss Felicia,” Mr. Hook said in a low voice, “YOU ARE LATE!”
“I’m not late!” I replied in a bold voice.
“It’s 4:01 and you had to be here by 4:00.”
“So why am I here?” “You have 14 missing assignments.”
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WHAT THE where am I? It was all red and holes ever where there were two moons there were footprints but only two so I followed them I looked all around and there were green goo. When I looked farther past I saw big towers and things flying around. When I got there all of the two footed green things looked at me. And the leader said “ATTACK” and they all came after me and I yelled I need a gun and one just poofed into my hand so i shout one of them it splattered green and gooey. I shoot them all than in their green nasty goo. I wrought MEANWHILE…
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