My Awakening: A Narrative Analysis

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My writing first semester has positive aspects but also has many negative aspects throughout. The introduction topic sentence of my Awakening essay showed one the the strength in my writing: “ The sound of the waves, the cool breeze in the air, and the feeling of freedom is what Edna loves the most about the water on Grand Isle” (1). My introduction sentences I considered a strength because it is important to draw the reader into the essay and make them want to keep reading, which is exactly what my introduction sentences of my essays do. However my essays are not perfect so some of my weaknesses do in fact shine through. In my Metamorphosis FRQ I did not do the best job in explaining my quote and how they tied back to my original thesis: “