Personal Narrative: A Real Good Job

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First you did a really good job of saying everything and answering what the questions were and keeping it simple and short. You also did a really good job of going back and doing a small review when talking about something that happed in the book, so if I did not remember you put the information there so that I wouldn’t have to go back and look it up or just not understand what you were talking about. I also used Mr. Connett’s 0-20 perfect squares as an example. Yes it was stressful during that at times especially when it got to less than a minute to 30 seconds, but on the bright side it helped my grade a lot and it’s easier at times in math when you need to know a number squared! Something that you did that I liked was you put some information