Personal Narrative Analysis

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I have lots to learn when it comes to writing. I have seen many errors and therefore i have a plan to fix them. In order to fix may mistakes i must learn how to utilize commas properly. I was not placing commas in their correct positions and at the same time i was creating unnecessary splices. With this new information, i went back and reviewed my old notes from last year. Afterwards, I practiced writing new sentences and sentence formulas. With commas addressed, i decide to write better and more varied sentences. In order to do this i would write more detailed sentences with more descriptions. I also looked at examples of books with detailed text and amazing third person storytelling so my essays could be in better quality. I could tell from