Personal Narrative Analysis

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I was at football practice and i looked up and saw my dad and my uncle and my grandma in the truck. My dad came out to see me and he said to my coach that he had to take me because something had happen. As I walked to the locker room with my dad he said, "something happened to mom."

"What? Is she okay?"

"She's in the hospital". He said choking back the tears.

Hearing my dads voice, I got scared.

He said that she had been at work and she just fell and she was not breathing.

I asked what happen.

My dad said that he did not know what happen and the doctor were doing every thing they could. So i had to stay at my uncles house for a while.

When i got to my uncles house i was really scared i thouit that i was going to lose my mom.
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Is she okay?"

"She's in the hospital". He said choking back the tears.

Hearing my dads voice, i got scared.

He said that she had been at work and she just fell and she was not breathing. And i asked what happen and he said that he did not know what happen and the doctor were doing every thing they could. So i had to stay at my uncles house for a while.

When i got to my uncles house I was really scared I thouit that I was going to lose my mom. A couple of days later they got her to come back alive. I was really happy because i did not lose my mom and I was jumping up and down when i herd that. Then a couple of days later they put her in a different in Portland were they new more about what happen. About a week later i finally got to go and see her in the hospital. When I saw her there i was so happy that she was there i wanted to yell. It was great to see her I was so happy that she was there but on the other hand I was really scared.
I loved spending time with her it was amazing but the sad thing was I only got to see he for a little bit. But it was still great to see I loved it I still never for get the feeling that I had when I was there

I was really happy because I did not lose my mom and I was jumping up and down when i herd