Personal Narrative: My Changes To My Paper

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I made so many changes to my paper. I first started out researching a completely different subject, love vs lust. When it became apparent that I wasn’t going to find anything useful to write this paper, I changed my subject to life. I found some good stuff, but something just wasn’t working. I believe it was because it was too broad of a term. Then I finally changed my paper to humanity, my current subject. I just couldn’t finish it, there really wasn’t a place to go. You helped me see that I was actually writing two papers instead of one. We went through and made a more connected, single argument paper. I felt a million times better and was able to finish the writing the paper that Sunday and Monday, with editing on Tuesday. The best thing