Personal Narrative: My First Race

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The time I almost died.

It was 2011 I was twelve years old I’ve been racing dirt bikes for about six years now and this was my first race of the year and so far, my last race for the rest of my life I can remember almost everything it was about 8:30 in the morning and me and my dad arrived in Tecumseh Michigan at an indoor race track called Prosource me and my dad liked to get there early so I could walk the track and get 2 or 3 practice laps in and to make sure my bike was running good and in case we had to work on it all so all my practice laps go perfectly we sit there relax a little bit and get some lunch and wait till we find out which heat race I’m in so a few hours pass by I’m sitting there talking to some friends and they finally
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I remember me not being able to move because it hurt so bad and then the doctor came and started talking to me asking If I remember anything. So, I told him that the only thing I remember is I tried to go for the triple and tried to pass the other kid and then I remember hitting the ground and not being able to breath and I couldn’t move my arm. Well the doctor told me that the shoulder pain was because I had broken my coaler bone and then he told me that I couldn’t breathe because I had a hole in my lung and it was letting blood get into my lungs and I was starting the choke on my own blood and he said I got a concussion when the bike had landed on my head the doctors said I was borderline dead when I get there because my heartbeat was so low and because blood was flowing so fast into my lungs that I was losing air so quickly and was drowning in my own blood. Then the doctor started talking about how my body wouldn’t be good enough to play other sports like baseball and football because of I wouldn’t be able to throw and run like I used to cause of my shoulder and