I.Attention-getter: Imagine waking up everyday to the same reality. Trapped in a small wired cage, not being able to go out for a run or a walk, with no attention to your needs. There is maggots in your food, with a bowl of dirty water and a strong smell of ammonia running through your nostrils.These are the horrible daily conditions of dogs in puppy mills.
II.Reveal Thesis: Puppy mills are a horrendous place that should be closed, but in order to resolve this issue we can take a stand against this practice.
III.Credibility: I myself love dogs and I have three of them. When I came to know about this issue, it horrified me how these breeders treat these loving animals. So I did a lot of research in order to know more about this ongoing cruelty.…show more content… ]
I.A puppy mill is inhumane place where it wrongly breeds puppies in order to make money.
A.Puppy mill breeders keep dogs in unsanitary conditions with no care of their well being.
1.These dogs are raised in harsh conditions such as being kept in small cages with no protection from the weather and no veterinary care.
2. In a puppy mill female dogs stops breeding, they are euthanized in a very cruel way by the breeder.
B.By breeding dogs inhumanely they leave these dogs with health and behavioral problems.
[Transition: Now that I went over what the problem is, I will provide some solutions we can do in order to stop these mills from making profit]
II. We can adopt pets from local shelters or buy from a known breeder so we can take puppy mills out of business.
A.One solution is to adopt pets from local or rescue shelters.
B.Another solution is to buy a pet from a known breeder.
