Persuasive Speech: Should Concussions Be Banned?

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I am writing to you today on behalf of concussions in football. My first question to you would be what is your view on football? Do you support the game or do you believe the game should be banned? Well if you support the side that thinks football should be banned and is too dangerous to play then the article you wrote either makes people agree with you or people will not be very happy with what you wrote. In the article you say that football is too dangerous, but there is certain things that players can do to prevent themselves from ending up in the hospital with a fatal injury. When people get concussions they are usually playing the game wrong. There are certain techniques to tackle so that you will not hurt your head. Another question that I have for you is why do write about only football injuries? If …show more content…
So if you saw that concussions publicized for killing people then most people in the world would think dang that sport is way too dangerous to play. So when people see things like that on the news most parents say no way they could put their kid in a game that could possibly end up really injure my kid. So when things come out like that it scares a lot of people, But they do not know that in the game that football players are taught the right way how to play football without getting hurt. There is also things you can do to prevent such bad things. If someone has a plastic helmet obviously they are going to end up with some type of injury. If someone is committed enough they will go out and get the right things for the players not to get hurt. Also if the sport was to be banned it would almost ruin America. It must be doing something right because during the super bowl there are millions of people watching the game. Usually people don’t watch something that they do not like. So that is what I think about the article that you