Revision Of Jane's Letter

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Revision of Janes Letter Jane decided to write a letter to a car dealership to express her concerns with their policy. Jane was upset and felt the dealership did not keep their word, nor thought they would fix the car. The strengths, weaknesses, and improvements for this letter will be explored. Jane consistently did well with capitalizing the first word of the sentence throughout her letter. Also, for the most part, complete sentences were arranged. Another strong point was capitalizing the proper nouns throughout the letter. When writing with frustration, errors seem to increase; however, Jane did have some strengths throughout her writing. On the other hand, at the beginning of the letter, I was asking myself what the purpose