Sacrifice: A Fictional Narrative

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One day in September 2014 , James and five of his friends were hanging out in the jail cafeteria eating lunch. Everything was going fine until one of the other inmates were slowly moving in on their lunch table. When they got to the table that's when all the trouble happened. One month before in August, James and his five friends were on their front porch hanging out and smoking. They were thinking about going and robbing a house nearby. “Wow, what an easy way to make money,” James said. Quickly after they had thought of the idea they decided to do it. The rest of that day they spent it on planning out how James and his friends were going to get in the house. They had a plan they knew would work. James was the one who was going to be driving the car. His friends were going to try to break in a random house. They decided to rob a house on a quiet street. It was a dead end. James said, …show more content…
They had gathered up all their gear and were on their way to the house that was darker than black. They slowly drove into the driveway as quiet as possible. James let them out of the car and they hurried around to the side of the house. They found a window that was slightly opened already so they slowly peaked in. They heard a loud noise and it was Paul, one of James friends had dropped his gun. Sean said, “Way to go.” They saw a man peak his head up off of his pillow faster than lightning. They quickly scattered to the back of the house to hide. After 30 minutes nothing had happened so they quickly ran back up to the window. All of a sudden they heard a man’s voice, “What are you boys doing here?” Sean panicked and started shooting his gun. It was like fireworks. Everyone panicked. They all ran back to the car where James was waiting. “Go, go, go,” Sean screamed. James drove off as fast as he could. “What happened, what happened,” James yelled. Sean screamed, “I think I might have shot