ESSAYS EXAMPLE
ANALYSIS
Avery Dukes, Jenny Powel,
and Natalie Kirk
Our Commentary
• 2A: We gave this essay a 7 because its not over the top
with is analysis and explanations, but it is well written.
• 2B: We gave this essay a 6 due to its lack of being
specific. However, it was accurate and made its point
• 2C: The essay earns a 5 because it addresses the topic,
but is under developed.
• 2A: 8 “demonstrates sophistication of thought” and
“builds a convincing case”
• 2B: 6 “analysis is supported…
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