She just blabs about Gaia the Earth goddess, white hedgehogs, Lorel, etc. and she doesn’t even know what she’s doing when she says these things. David gets more confused and involved into a world where he doesn’t even want to be in and he’s starting to think that everybody is going crazy. It just causes some bad confusion with other characters. The sixth mistake I’m going to identify is on page 124, where David drags Bonnington the cat out from under the bed. Bonnington then jumps into a packing bag and David tries to get him out, but the cat just hisses at him. Then David wonders why Bonnington is hissing. Well, he just dragged him out from under the bed. I would give David a bit more common sense in this little part because carrying cats like babies is a bad idea in general. Although, this part does add some humor, so I wouldn’t suggest to many things to