You Are Cold Marble Diction

In complete honesty, I found your poem difficult to decipher. The lines can be correlated in several ways. However, if you could offer a few lines of clarity within the poem, it would enable readers to have a better grasp on the poem’s theme/topic. The diction used throughout the poem appealed to me because the line structure appears simple and elementary. Nonetheless, the words in the poem seems carefully chosen and well thought out. Even the reference of Pygmalion in line three was clever “You are the man who made the statue. You are cold marble.” The way you make the transition from the subject being the creator of the statue to becoming the statue. After line twelve there is a shift in the imagery the poem provides. Lines thirteen into

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