Personal Narrative Analysis

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We decided our roles just a day before we did our recording. Thus, we were not that smoothly since we only practiced for a really short of time. However, we still finished our recording successfully. We started with introduction of ourselves. Then, each of us took roles to explain the parts we had. Martin was the first one to start our presentation, he explained clearly with a peaceful intonation. The comment I had for him was to add more examples in to the definitions. Second one was Tommy. I really liked his examples from his family, which made me fell realistic and close to our life. I suggested that he could make more eye contact when he was presenting. Skipped my part, next one was Hannah. She had a huge section and could not add all her