to dance. I would dance all time, no matter the time or place. My mother took this as an opportunity to put me in ballet, a dance that was elegant, feminine, and graceful, all things a mother should want her daughter to be. When I started the class, I was anything but graceful, and after one too many tumbles off the stage, I decided to try Irish dance. My first Irish dance class was a complete fiasco. I had gotten there late, I was wearing the wrong shoes, and I was terrified due to my previous…
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The people I met through dance made my life. Some of my hardest times were in high school, and going to class every night was my escape. You would think that spending hours a day with the same people would get annoying, but it wasn't. It was exactly what I needed, and they created the drive for me to want to push myself to be a better dancer as well as a better…
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Personal Narrative Sagar Shah 9TC *Names have been altered* There I was for the first time, backstage where all I was saying to myself was, “Just relax, don’t freak out and don’t mess up.” I looked to my left, there I saw my best friend Jake, who was as nervous as I was, “Chill dude don’t worry,” I said to him, “if we mess up, then we’ll mess up together.” He looked more nervous than ever now, I shouldn’t have told him that we would mess up. I knew we shouldn’t sweat it because we had…
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Perez 1 Cameron Perez English II Personal Narrative 8 January 2015 Tone: Reflective The Last Competition It was December 12th and my teammates and I were having our last practice before Pom State. In the previous practices, we pushed ourselves and worked extremely hard but our team had been dealing with the stress that our competition and upcoming finals bring. Because of these stressors, our practice was laid back and relaxing. We had been working on our routines for months and we f…
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1. The structure of the Fiftieth Gate Fragmented Narrative Structure In place of a linear narrative style (i.e. a flow through from the beginning to the end), 50th Gate features a fragmented narrative structure, with different intersecting and overlapping scenes. Mark Baker structures the book in this way because ‘he doesn’t not believe in beginnings, nor in endings’. He believes that life is not linear, similarly, the place the book ends is the place it begins; “it always begins in blackness until…
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My Borderlands Story My life is like a tapestry, hand-woven, a story told through all the different threads that make up it. This is where I find my borderland, something that transcends the tangible threads of my life. It’s a whole other world where my identity blurs. Some people attribute borderlands to physical, geographical spaces. Still, I see it as marked by the culture surrounding me, the different age demographics, and the social classes that unconsciously define us. As I think about my experiences…
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go to relax? After coming home from a long day of work and school my bathroom is where I lose my thoughts and rejuvenate for the next day. I view my bathroom as my personal spa. Even if it is only for a moment, I enjoy my time in this room. What relax me are the aromas of lavender scented candles that I have around the Jacuzzi and both vanities. The flower smell of bath salts that I poor in to the water makes my nostril dance. I get an alluring feel of spring when I am in this room, from the…
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Throughout this passage from Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen utilises various narrative techniques. These include dialogic qualities (showing) and the use of third person narrative including focalisation and free indirect speech (telling). Both showing and telling work on different levels to further the reader’s interpretation of different characters and give meaning to the novel as a whole. The use of dialogue allows the reader to engage in conversations between characters, thus adding drama to…
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preserve what is left and give the indigenous people sense of self the aboriginal culture and all knowledge will continue to break down and the inequality between the white society and the aboriginal society will increase if change doesn’t occur. My first related material a cartoon by R.Cobb also presents a negative view of progress. The cartoon uses two similar visual images to comment on man’s relationship with the world around him, it also shows how mankind has negatively changed over the years…
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Kassandra Gallegos B.3 – External: Unit 1: Personal Narrative Writing Assignment 09/17/2013 Drew Howard Every New Years, Frye’s Skating Rink has this thing called all night skate, where you skate from 7pm to 7am. Every year me and all of my friends went, it was “the thing” to do back then. One year in particular was my favorite, 2009 to be exact. It was the night I met the person I’ll be spending the rest of my life with. My friend Devin was there who I had known since the beginning of…
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